Goodbye Poem by ray almenario jr.

Goodbye

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I stand before the roaring sea of dreams and ambitions
With stormy clouds looming across the red horizon
The smashing waves are giants with shimmering swords
Hurling invectives and discouraging words

I have nothing with me but my soul and my craft
My heart pounding with profound fear and hesitation
But for a dream i will fight to hold on fast
Lest i live my life with a futile reason

Through your waves i will sail to never come back
Leaving behind stark memories of heartache and defeat
Let your waters cleanse my blood-dripping heart
As i slowly drift through the core of your vastness..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Min Sia 12 January 2009

Ang galing! Napakaganda! Very fine imagery..superb writing..words neatly chosen! A very deep thought..and very powerful emotions..holding on to the promise of a new tomorrow! Thanks for sharing!

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ray almenario jr.

ray almenario jr.

makati citi, philippines
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