Goodbye Poem by Jamal Brown

Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


Whether you're right next to me

or far across the sky

we are a part of one another

you and I

I never deserved you

But you were everything to me

there are better men out there and you'll

find one

Just know that my heart will

cease

Our hearts will beat in a perfect harmony

Yours and mine

Our hearts will beat in a perfect harmony and I'll be there

until the end of time

I wish I could say more but there's nothing

left to say

But Goodbye

Hope you have a blessed life and a blessed day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 16 August 2009

A great share of your heart Jamal, your words echo your feeling through out my brother...fine work....A very touchingly expressed piece 10++ for emotion

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Shashendra Amalshan 13 August 2009

hey this is very moving, nice one indeed///... filled with emotions... love, passion... written by a 16 year old handsomme man indeed.. love shan

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