Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Goodbye Comments

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a sweet goodbye placidly says a welcome hello
for another day to stay, in a moment of time in the
heart that always look for a beautiful adieu
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Antonio Liao
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Yelena M. 02 October 2009

'the river flows in the ocean floor would see, in far North the icy flash where the heaven goes the breezing air repose, now tell, the dawning night the knight fall into the heaven nest may toll..' Beautiful expression. Your ode to Goodbye captures any eye, Antonio. Thanks for sharing with us. Yelena M.

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Kesav Easwaran 01 October 2009

'where is the humming bird settle in the teary eyes the falling tear dropp dried, wipe my moment to last for the hour never laps, touch not my past, nay! dream that wash me out, for the sun still dry waiting to say dear goodbye'... these ines i liked...very much imaginative...thanks...10

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