Sunday, April 16, 2017

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 4.5

Where are you? There's a wall preventing me from reaching you.
Where are you? It's like you disappeared into a world of emptiness.
Where are you? I want to be apart of your world, but you're no where to be found.
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Bridget Gabrielle
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Seamus O Brian 25 April 2017

Do I ever come across your mind? Even after bitter pain and disappointment, our souls still long to be valued. Even if you reject me, am I not of some significance? Honest and raw, poignantly rendered. You have talent in transforming your heart to your words. We will look forward to more of your work, good poet.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 April 2017

A touching poem. Thanks

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B G 16 April 2017

Thank you so much!

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Norah Tunney 16 April 2017

Heartbreakingly beautiful Bridget especially the line the question where are you it's like a cry from the depths of the heart. Also the sadness in the lines Goodbye for you have put me last but even so you are still wondering do I ever come across your mind? I had a similar experience a couple of years ago. You capture the whole senario so concisely. Loved it, full marks Bridget

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