Gravity Poem by Jayne Downing

Gravity

Rating: 5.0


The map of years woven across your face
Tells of the journeys you took without me
But all paths pull me back to your eyes,
Intense and blue as ever
Vivid pools of earlier days draw me in
Calling me to the times we shared before.
And the look I never quite understood,
The searching, reaching out that jarred against innocent eyes
Saying things words could never repeat
Hemmed in by my band of gold
I would often catch your gaze
Ant think what a wonderful friend you were to me
But now you wear the band while I am free
I recognise in your eyes the hint of an apology
And finally I see the gravity of your stare.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 12 March 2007

Liked this, lovely contrast between the ring wearer/gravity and the narrator. -chuck

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Aldo Kraas 15 February 2007

Nice poem Well written

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Séamus Fox 15 February 2007

Nice Jayne though sad well done! ! Glad ya made it this is a good site with (mostly) nice people! !

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