Green And Gold Poem by Nomad Omnia

Green And Gold

Rating: 3.5


'Nothing gold can stay'
You said...'but why? '
'It's nature's way'
(My weak reply) .

Gold yields to green
For green lives long
Yet burns to gold
At Autumn's song

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick McFarland 14 August 2009

The essence of 'good things come in small packages' Nomad. 10+

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Patti Masterman 13 August 2009

What a perfect trinket of a poem. I knew it would be wonderful just from the title. Just had that look about it. Guard this one well; don't lose track of it! (smile)

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Sandra Fowler 30 April 2009

Superb last stanza. It is a small gem of a poem. It needs no other words. Rare colours for a rare moment. Hold fast, it may not come again. Warm regards, Sandra

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~ Jon London ~ 13 April 2009

Lovely painting of words that bloom with loving colour and meaning

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Original Unknown Girl 10 March 2009

Strong imagery with so few words. HG: -) xx

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