Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Growing Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the dim light of the room I caught your eyes
wandering in my face;
feeling the fine lines that are bound to sink deeper.
Yes I will have wrinkles.
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Marwa Rakha
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Alison Cassidy 24 October 2009

As one with more wrinkles than you, I found this poem very powerful and very moving. You managed to convey not only the strength of standing up for yourself, but also the underlying vulnerability at your rejection. You share your passion for 'a fair go for all' with skill and a good feel for language. 'Instead of searching my soul for answers, they raised reckless question marks.' is beautifully expressed. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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