Saturday, June 7, 2008

Growing Closer To That Final Day When Gravity Pulls Me Under Comments

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My hair has grown thick, gray and long;
covering my ears it impairs my hearing.
The stentorian voice that guided me
through life has been deafly silenced,
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Ted Sheridan
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Ivan Donn Carswell 07 June 2008

This is a Fight? So you give UP! Surrender even. Where's the real guts of it? Geeze Ted, we're the few who are left - lets giv'em a rousing punch up the bracket at least. Oh, - okay, a well written and cleverly phrased poem which most of our members wouldn't recognise unless they confronted it adversarily in a county courthouse... Rgds, Ivan

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