Gulf Night Water Poem by elysabeth faslund

Gulf Night Water

Rating: 5.0


Three quarter moon-painted water,
Salted, waved, blue V-
To horizons...
Past, through, on,
Now.

My bag's packed, waiting, dusty.
Long past horizon's Time.
Beckons known, heard,
Giggling foam

Rounds my feet, walking,
Stumbling...one sandbar,
Deep drop-off. Fins.
Silence slices, waiting.

Do my clothes swim with me?
Are they gifts for the
Sandbar?
With my
Bag?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 23 May 2008

Your voice is very powerful in this poem Elysabeth, the punctuation and stop/starts work so well. I really enjoyed reading this poem. HG: -) xx

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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