! Gullible Traveler (Social/Political Commentary)

Rating: 4.0

Traversing
Desolate
Territory

Drawn to
And ensnared
By viscid sounds

Vexatious
Wailing moans
Heavy, denseness

Exotic
Psychotic
Alien lure

Imploding
Black hole of
Negativity

Friday, October 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: commentary
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was inspired by the Poemhunter Forum and originally posted by me on PH in 2006 © Alice Vedral Rivera - 2006
Published in 'Shadows on the Carpet I' © 2014 Alice Vedral Rivera All rights reserved.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Skati 03 October 2014

It's a pretty poem about the truth of things around us.

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