Haiku-11(Noon) Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

Haiku-11(Noon)

Rating: 4.0


"It's the time to love"
Says sun, "…the hills as old as me.."
And this love making noon.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 26 October 2015

dear Saheb, I invite you to visit the HAIKU SOCIETY OF AMERICA web-site. Haiku, as a poetic form, have to respect some rules. Your write, here -as others I've read-, doesn't respect them. It remains an interesting write, but to call it 'haiku', you need to modify it. Take it as a friendly advice, from a poet to a colleague poet. Peace Fabrizio

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* Sunprincess * 13 August 2015

........nicely written...noon is a special time ★

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2014

Beautiful Haiku inspired by nature.

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