dear Saheb,
I invite you to visit the HAIKU SOCIETY OF AMERICA web-site. Haiku, as a poetic form, have to respect some rules. Your write, here -as others I've read-, doesn't respect them. It remains an interesting write, but to call it 'haiku', you need to modify it.
Take it as a friendly advice, from a poet to a colleague poet.
Peace
Fabrizio
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dear Saheb, I invite you to visit the HAIKU SOCIETY OF AMERICA web-site. Haiku, as a poetic form, have to respect some rules. Your write, here -as others I've read-, doesn't respect them. It remains an interesting write, but to call it 'haiku', you need to modify it. Take it as a friendly advice, from a poet to a colleague poet. Peace Fabrizio