ion untaru

Rookie (3 december 1939 / Village Finta, Dambovitza)

Haiku / 16 - Poem by ion untaru

we and the moon
the whole sea is our
night swim

romanian version:

noi si luna
toata marea e a noastra
scalda nocturna

Comments about Haiku / 16 by ion untaru

  • (6/27/2011 4:01:00 AM)

    The poem doesn't meet the criteria of a haiku. A haiku has 17 syllables while your poem contains only 11. Please read more about haiku. You should never attempt a thing unless you have expertise in it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, June 27, 2011

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