Haiku / 16 Poem by ion untaru

Haiku / 16

Rating: 1.5


we and the moon
the whole sea is our
night swim

romanian version:

noi si luna
toata marea e a noastra
scalda nocturna

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

The poem doesn't meet the criteria of a haiku. A haiku has 17 syllables while your poem contains only 11. Please read more about haiku. You should never attempt a thing unless you have expertise in it.

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Village Finta, Dambovitza
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