Haiku 345 Poem by Ari Alsio

Haiku 345

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of imprisoned
is on the bottom hearts
all to us the spring

Monday, November 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ari Alsio 02 November 2015

So many times we have our customs prisoners, to keep getting up to look at what others are doing, thanks to the positive criticism.

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M Asim Nehal 02 November 2015

Wonderful haiku.............I liked it............ Indeed it has philosophical undertone...Everything grows from the bottom and so do the life and love but what a place you selected for love to grow..Amusing...

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Ari Alsio 02 November 2015

Man is his own way in prison, leisure is just unbeatable in deep snow.

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