Ari Alsio

H 348 - Poem by Ari Alsio

leaned quiet
it bitching spirit playing
inside the pain

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Haiku

Comments about H 348 by Ari Alsio

  • Marie Shine (7/31/2016 7:04:00 AM)

    Yes, life can be spiteful at times, but it is during these painful times in life that we learn how strong we are inside and it is also these times which we learn most from. Both inspiring and stimulating, I like this Senryu very much. Thank you for sharing Ari... (Report) Reply

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  • Liza Sudina (11/2/2015 10:49:00 PM)

    bitching spirit playing
    inside the pain -
    GENIUS line!
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    Ari Alsio (11/3/2015 12:22:00 AM)

    The line has its own and unique, thanks to Liza.

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/2/2015 11:06:00 AM)

    Deeply envisioned. Well depicted. Thanks. (Report) Reply

    Ari Alsio (11/2/2015 11:08:00 AM)

    Thank you Kumarmani.

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/2/2015 8:34:00 AM)

    Painful yet adorable......Loved it. (Report) Reply

    Ari Alsio (11/2/2015 8:52:00 AM)

    That is, the experience gives material, when only he could put them on paper is always the way he wants. Thank you again for your kind words.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, May 20, 2016

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