H 348 Poem by Ari Alsio

H 348

Rating: 5.0


leaned quiet
it bitching spirit playing
inside the pain

Monday, November 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2015

Deeply envisioned. Well depicted. Thanks.

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Ari Alsio 02 November 2015

Thank you Kumarmani.

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M Asim Nehal 02 November 2015

Painful yet adorable......Loved it.

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Ari Alsio 02 November 2015

That is, the experience gives material, when only he could put them on paper is always the way he wants. Thank you again for your kind words.

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