Haiku- -375 ( Calyx Of Flower) Poem by SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR

Haiku- -375 ( Calyx Of Flower)

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calyx of flower
the emotional cloud left
few drops of his love

Friday, August 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 12 August 2016

Nice try, I am happy to see you have learned the format 5-7-5 syllable but try and avoid your own interpretation such as the emotional cloud.....A cloud can never be emotional....instead you can say Floating/ flowing cloud....

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