Sunday, March 2, 2008

Haiku: A Bird Comments

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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary
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* Sunprincess * 26 June 2014

................very nice write.....little birds need to rest also.....

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Michael Pruchnicki 02 March 2008

Jyoti - Good work on a haiku! Perhaps if you changed it here & there - bird rests in a tree miles and miles from its nest many more miles to rest I don't know about you, but that's part of the fun writing a haiku, right?

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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Madhubani, Bihar, India
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