royness ( ' ' )

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(haiku) - Confession - Poem by royness ( ' ' )

here priests in boxes
lay hands on wicked children
soaking up the sins

Comments about (haiku) - Confession by royness ( ' ' )

  • (11/13/2007 10:55:00 AM)

    I like this haiku a lot. Powerful image of the priests' hands acting as a kind of wick (pun on wicked) syphoning up the children's misdeeds. Good work. As I'm sure you know, haikus are one of the hardest forms to write-not much room to get it right. Cheers. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 20, 2010

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