john tiong chunghoo

Gold Star - 4,927 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

Haiku - Dawn Lake - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

dawn lake
slowly the lilies open our hearts
to their full charm

dawn lake
the lilies open their way
to our hearts

dawn lake
our talk open our hearts
like the full bloom lilies

dawn lake
when we began our talk
the closed lilies, now the full bloomed

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 4, 2008

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