Haiku - Eel Twists And Twists Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Haiku - Eel Twists And Twists



eel
twists, twists, twists
on a straight line

fishing -
the lucky man gets
The unlucky fish

his lips the same
shade as her lipstick
after the strong kiss

adulterated pleasure
mixing grade A rice with B
for the price of A

Morning tea
An overeager fly dips into it
Then waves its legs at me

below the waterfall
her tresses becomes a waterfall
over her bodice

stubbing his cigarette
lecturer goes to teach students
about harmful smoking

Friday, April 1, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: fish,fishing,smoking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

These are all wonderful! Love number three!

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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