Haiku: Nature's Mirror Poem by A B Faniki

Haiku: Nature's Mirror



A clear still pond will
always reflect faces because
it's nature's mirror.

Wednesday, August 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
© A B Faniki all right reserved. Nature haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 September 2019

" A traditional Japanese haiku is a three-line poem with seventeen syllables, written in a 5/7/5 syllable count." [ my wife is Japanese, so i'd better do it this way ] ok! Using this 'definition' of Haiku as my guide, I've 'penned' (ok, i've typed) my response. Bri Faces Pond's Surface My face reflected The pond's surface collapsing Shattered forever bri :)

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Kostas Lagos 09 August 2019

Beautiful image, excellent haiku

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