Haiku: Rattler Poem by A B Faniki

Haiku: Rattler

Rating: 5.0


A gust of wind sail
pass it rattle windows and
Uproot trees in rage

Wednesday, September 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,life,nature,tree,wind
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A B Faniki © 09/18/2019 a gust of wind is about the wind destruction who in jus a minute or seconds it pull things down or up.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 September 2019

Typo.... A fascinating three liner write.....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 September 2019

An fascinating three liner write that captures the power of Mother Nature. Yes, when nature imposes its wrath, it can take everything and can even deliver us to the state of nothingness.

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Kostas Lagos 19 September 2019

A good haiku my friend! Great work

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