KIRTI SHAH

Bronze Star - 2,008 Points (18/4/1955 / mumbai (india))

'Haiku' The Pool Of The River - Poem by KIRTI SHAH

Like or not,
wave not back
Life
*
Sound remain
Life of
Flowing water
*
like or not
wave support
water

*
whirlpool
smoothly move
Conditional life
*
Deep calm
Shallow water
noisy
*
Sink deeply fear
Shallow tuberculosis
Rowing
*
Not diver not swimmer
Fear flux
Water
*
Something hit
Does smooth
Edge, stone
*
Fear the pool of death
Close secrete
Nature
*
Floats death
Dead floats
Water deeply

Topic(s) of this poem: haiku

Form: Haiku


Comments about 'Haiku' The Pool Of The River by KIRTI SHAH

  • David Wood (9/6/2015 6:50:00 AM)


    Sorry, , , , a haiku should be 5-7-5 syllables....Do try again as haikus are good poetry. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
Read all 1 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags


Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 6, 2015



[Report Error]