Half the world lives,
Half the world makes,
Half the world gives
While the other half takes.
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An unfortunate rip-off of the Rush song, Half the World, from their 1996 album Test for Echo. For all who enjoyed this poem, I recommend checking out the original. It's a great song. I hope your other poems are more unique, Daegal.
Wow this is such a good poem i agree it just makes sense its really inspirational for me too write my own poems and understand how and what to write for class cudos
i know i've commented on this poem before, but obviously not. i've read this soo many times. it just makes soo much sense. i love it! ! great work: ]
interesting and cool, and powerful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice flow and beat! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! wonderful; @ I'm a new poet so i only have one 'masterpiece' if i may say so myself, please give your comment to it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! thanksssss! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! again, great job
oh my gosh this is such a terrific poem and its unique i love it
what is half of a poem