Sunday, May 3, 2009

Halku (1) - New Variety Haiku Comments

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(1) only treasure
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is hanging loosely
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Dagmara Anna 06 May 2009

This type of the poetry resembles the haiku. Even though principles of writing are less rigorous, necessary elements are an impediment: the determined subject matter and the need to fit words in three lines (lines) and for structure 5.7,5. It is difficult, but as can be seen negotiable. I like him on account of the resulting advantage of this discipline. Such writing is teaching self-disciplines, thinkings, frugalities of the word. He lets then notice mistakes in other poems. A play on words is an additional positive element, with times the ambiguity and the element of the humour not to say sometimes of raciness. Very much I like HALKU, they are teaching me and they are entertaining. I recommend everyone as part of the exercise. I like it very much. Thank you :)) Dagmara Anna

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