Look how they walk apart,
each to their lonely end.
Not hand in hand as lovers do.
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Painfully beautiful...an image rich and emotionally charged piece jerry. jxx
A very well composed piece of writing Jerry, I loved the last verse, wonderfully explained. Keep holding hands whilst you can. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This one always makes me cry - such bitter sweet musings. love, Allie xxxx
Great imagery in the second stanza Jerry. Also, loved the title and the romance and your clever style. Karin Anderson