Monday, October 29, 2007

Hand In Hand Comments

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Look how they walk apart,
each to their lonely end.
Not hand in hand as lovers do.
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jerry hughes
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Great imagery in the second stanza Jerry. Also, loved the title and the romance and your clever style. Karin Anderson

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R H 04 April 2008

Painfully beautiful...an image rich and emotionally charged piece jerry. jxx

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Ernestine Northover 30 October 2007

A very well composed piece of writing Jerry, I loved the last verse, wonderfully explained. Keep holding hands whilst you can. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Alison Cassidy 29 October 2007

This one always makes me cry - such bitter sweet musings. love, Allie xxxx

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