Happiness Poem by Brandie Mejia

Happiness

Rating: 4.0


its when a child laughs
its when a woman gives birth
its at an alter exchanging vows
its at a family reunion
its in a home
its at a park
its everywhere
its in your eyes when you look at me
its in my smile while looking back at you
its in our hearts
its the feeling you give me
its when you hold me close
its how i feel now
happiness is how i like to feel
and happiness is how you make me feel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 09 August 2008

I gave this a recommended 8 because happiness is the only thing life is really all about. It is the subject of our lives. This could have been written better perhaps, but that is fine. Just as long as it is writen about. GW62

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