Dave Birss

Rookie (28th October 1971 / Glasgow, Scotland)

Happysad - Poem by Dave Birss

I'm happysad
laughcrying from our
goodbye-ing
and farewell kisses
and this is
uglybeautiful
cos through the
smilingtears
it's clear
that you and I
should never say
goodbye


Comments about Happysad by Dave Birss

  • (4/3/2006 2:04:00 PM)


    Dave, glad to see some new poems. I like your e.e. cummings-ish style and inventiveness here-ish. -chuck (Report) Reply

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  • (4/2/2006 4:07:00 PM)


    Quite the conversion of words.

    Patricia gale
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 2, 2006



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