Happysad Poem by Dave Birss

Happysad



I'm happysad
laughcrying from our
goodbye-ing
and farewell kisses
and this is
uglybeautiful
cos through the
smilingtears
it's clear
that you and I
should never say
goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 03 April 2006

Dave, glad to see some new poems. I like your e.e. cummings-ish style and inventiveness here-ish. -chuck

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Patricia Gale 02 April 2006

Quite the conversion of words. Patricia gale

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Dave Birss

Dave Birss

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