Saturday, May 24, 2008

Hard To Believe Comments

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it is hard to believe
that he is going to forget and leave
and without him i cant live
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lara arnaout
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Yes, love is like a flower, a rose... and it dies when we neglect it turning our face towards other flowers... Truly beautiful write...

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Howard Johnson 24 May 2008

What a quality write, the only suggestion is to capatilize the begining of each stanza, beyond that a true pleasure to read.

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