Sunday, October 8, 2006

Harvest Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hyperactive dead soul's hegemony sent their heavenly body aliens
to the earth for a research of current crisis.
At first hand they have been to the henpecked politicians
who play hide-and-seek and found their hideouts.
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Alison Cassidy 21 November 2008

Damn! Denis has preempted my comment about your 'henpecked politicians who play hide-and-seek and found their hideouts.' Such economy of words - and yet what a punch they pack. Your use of irony is second to none. Brilliant. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 08 October 2006

Very cynical and satirical. I believe these aliens need a reality check.' Their 'Harvest Festival' sounds more like Bedlam than Utopia to me.Cheers for your rich imagination. Sandra

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Joseph Daly 08 October 2006

'At first hand they have been to the henpecked politicians who play hide-and-seek and found their hideouts.' What an outstanding turn of phrase, Nimal. This is an incredible achievement as you bring together the wrongs in such a short poem and how these things are brushedunder the carpet. The imagery is fantastic such an inteligent way of constructing a narrative. I bow to you my friend.

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