Hate U Poem by Lechelle Jones (01.24.91,D.C)

Hate U

Rating: 5.0


U mean as much to me as mud on the ground to me
I hate you with a passion

you hurt me more than any other

you had no right to put your hands on me in an angry way.

you mean nothing to me now, and you thought I was being mean before you have yet to see what I can do.

Maybe someday I'll forgive you but that dosent mean we'd be back together

Im so over and done with you now and forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Joaquin 17 June 2009

Hate and anger can be the most powerful emotions and feelings we experience. I would say even more so than love, since love can lead to hate and anger.

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Kevin Fisher 16 June 2009

Its so dark I love it nice work oh try seperating your sentences ya know make 2 sentences into one it will look and sound better

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Tracey Wynn 13 June 2009

I actually like this, It shows that hate is a strong emotion. Good work. I give it a 10

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