Hatred Poem by S.Ayesha Sultana

Hatred

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Hatred comes first from relation;
Because you have some exaltation.
Hatred doesn't stops with one,
At the same time doesn't shows to everyone.
It is a kind of fruit, which occurs at the time of taste
The main reason for this is partial;
Which man sees directly in visual.
To tell the truth it is a rotten egg,
Which man seems every time to beg.
To treat this disease, you should not have some cash,
But a little love, or else you will become an ash.
______________________________________________________________________Date: 10/01/2015
Place: Coimbatore

Friday, January 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Feel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem mainly talks about hatred that we should not hate anybody, at the same time it is man's nature that he cannot be without hating others because it is one of his quality and inborn nature.We have heard a proverb that 'Prevention is better than cure' and this proverb why i have used here is you cannot stop hating your enemies but can avoid hating your enemies by coming far away from them and that will be very much better because it will make your life fruitful and keep your life away from sorrows and so the MAIN MESSAGE from this poem is we must not be addicted to hatred because hatred is a the only feel that will ruin our life.This poem is mainly dedicated to all of my fellow beings in this present world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 11 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, S.Ayesha. A sublime start with a nice poem,

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 January 2015

a beautiful message, S.Ayesha. We need it. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing

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