Have A Long Life Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Have A Long Life



Daily activities
Take toll on you
Have some time off
And relax yourself
Like a race car
That takes a ride
On its special trailer
To save some of its life.

When it rains
Cover yourself with
Waterproof clothes
Not to get wet
And don't you walk
On painted lines
They look like guides
But maybe slippery.

Simple observations
Save you some days
Add more to these
To make life long.

Wednesday, June 12, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 18 June 2013

life gets so demanidng sometimes it is good to sit back and relax. nice

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Somanathan Iyer 16 June 2013

Nice advice with real concern. Thanks sir,

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Valsa George 15 June 2013

Take a break and relax! Look around and watch Nature and life! That will enhance quality life! ! A sound advice!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 June 2013

Good advice, but people would normally do what they like..Thank you for sharing..

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