Have you ever felt the way I do?
Sad
Lonely
And frightened?
Have you ever felt the need I feel?
Loved
Accepted
Excited?
Have you ever seen the things I've seen?
Love
Hate
And fighting?
Have you ever been the places I've been?
The dark
The sky
In hiding?
If you've ever felt the way I do
Then you surely understand
The pain that I am going through
The torture still at hand....
(P.S. For those who may think the wrong thing at the end, I am speaking of emotional torture, an indirect form at that....)
Poetry brings pleasure and it brings ' emotional torture ' as well. You have a very good poetic sensibility. Every sensetive soul goes through the feelings you have expressed. Please keep writing the way you feel and see the things. I would recommend you to read my poem ' Where Did You See Her '. I hope you will find it worth reading. Best Wishes Naseer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is great Cheylee. A little dark and definitely different. You have a style all your own. Nice job.