He Did Something Right Poem by Lynn Grassette

He Did Something Right

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“I...” he stutters
I just stare at him

“I....’ he stumbles
I give a half grin

I....” he’s scared
And my patience is running thin

“I love you” he smiles
He actually did the right thing

Lynn Grassette
Wednesday, January 31, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: running
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Original Unknown Girl 20 March 2007

How lovely that he uttered those words.... lovely way of expressing that little moment. HG: -) xx

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Jerry Hughes 12 February 2007

...succinct and delightful

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*Mandy * 06 February 2007

oh that's so sweet! It makes me smile!

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Original Unknown Girl 01 February 2007

Cute! ! Love it Linley.... HG: -) xx

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Not a member No 4 01 February 2007

Excellent! A perfect miniature drama! jim

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