Colors turn from orange to dark purple
The mountains emphasizing the shades
Covering my eyes from the brilliance
I sigh, another wonderful day.
It's so perfect here with you
Watching the sun drift from sight,
And a painters palette for the sky
You are as beautiful as these colors
As they shift, sway, and change,
Although I suppose like these colors
You to, will fade
The sun sets on us
Hey, miss negative. That sunset you've sketched so well may be one of many! But you're right in the ultimate sense. It sets on all of us sooner or later. Sooner than you'd expect too! But hey, that's negative stuff from me now! ! Perfect moments like this don't come along too often though and should be cherished in just this way. Finely evocative. Very sparing but effective use of language. Keep writing Lin. I look forward to reading your work. jim
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beautiful Job. A great picture and great detail. I love to watch the sun set too. I sit on my roof and watch the sun go down. ♥ Mandy