He Is Beautiful Poem by Fatin Khalid

He Is Beautiful

Rating: 4.5


He is beautiful
Unlike others I've come across
Not the usual beauty in a man I see
He is different in ways that I cannot define
Even if I try
It wouldn't do justice for him
Not many would flock around
Only I see the beauty within
With those sweet, intense eyes
The laughable smile
When he comes near me
I try to maintain
That I don't feel anything
I want to hide from the shame
Because he is different
Too different for me
It's something that cannot ever be
An impossibility
I try to remove this thought inside
But my heart won't abide
And this feelings I still hide
Infatuation? Can it be?
Or is this love, truly?
Tell me now before I go too far
Before I wish upon a wishing star
For I can't stand feeling this alone
Because he is beautiful
And I wish him my own

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 09 June 2008

This is so beautifully written that it is easy to feel the love she has for the man. She does not describe him but she doesn't have to, because she lets us see him through the eyes of her heart. I have rarely seen this written as well as she has written it. I gave it a 9. This is my high limit score. Beautiful! GW62

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