Monday, September 18, 2006

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A bird flew in from the west,
he was a little out of breath.
His heart was pumping in his chest,
he was the first to land he was the best.
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David Darbyshire
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Nalini Hebbar 18 September 2006

birds in a nest...happy content looking towards a bright future...nice sweet poem dave...your poem brings with it a breath of fresh air...love...nalini

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Tranquil Ocean 18 September 2006

Dave...you have got my heart chirping with your poem.Thanks Love TO

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