Tyler Tillett

He Promised

He promised me his world.
He promised that I was everything.
He promised his love
He promised his life.
He promised.
He promised that I was the one, that he loved me.
He promised, and he threw it away.

Poem Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2008
Poem Edited: Thursday, March 13, 2008

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Comments about He Promised by Tyler Tillett

  • Twysted Xprezzions (5/24/2008 11:18:00 PM)

    I agree with Blacknessrose..... i like it.... sums up a whole lot of feelings and emotions into a form that can be appreciated and understood by all who read it

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  • BlacknessRose ... (4/2/2008 11:48:00 AM)

    I like it,
    It's short, sweet, and to the point. It shows what most guys do.

    Lovez,
    Katya

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  • MCKENZi : ] (3/11/2008 3:27:00 PM)

    yeah, guys tend to do that - lie. ugh.: [

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  • Andrew Leone (3/10/2008 6:36:00 AM)

    deep n yea that guy was a dick but i've been there with my past gf's. one day i hope you find that special someone

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  • Make A Wish (3/9/2008 9:05:00 PM)

    that is truley deep... i love it.

    people always promise you everything, but always break those promises

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  • Rae Rae (3/7/2008 11:37:00 PM)

    thats real deep
    and thats why promise aren't much to me

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