He's Gone; Who's He? Poem by Apphia Grimonia

He's Gone; Who's He?

Rating: 5.0


I was sitting outside my house
When suddenly my friend came running towards me
Breathing heavily with eyes full of anxious
Something's going wrong I guess
With a rushing heart beat she say
'He's gone'
Who is he?
Consciousness filled in my head
I keep quiet while my heart beat so fast
Praying he's not someone importance
With shaking voice I asked
'Who is he? '
Suddenly my tears fell slowly
When she mentioned a named that I thought of everyday
Felt the world was crumble
My mind become blank as no word can explain
My heart felt like there's a sharp knife stab in
My tongue become harden
With my body shaking and cold
I sat there regretting my whole day
That I don't take a chance
To say a simple word to him
Such as 'I LOVE YOU'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maldrick Lee 10 August 2014

a very well compose poem simple but really captures the imagination.keep it up

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Desert Life 21 June 2012

A very good one with a good flow, though v sad! A 10.

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Dave Walker 16 March 2012

A really sad poem, full of true emotion, a great write.

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