Monday, September 5, 2011

Heart Ache Comments

Rating: 4.5

I know you will always be there
But now my life took a turn and i know you think it's unfair
I supported you and your decision
I'm sorry i'm not apart of your vision
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Krystal ...
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izzy Barnwell 28 October 2011

Good job keep it up!

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Romeo Della Valle 10 September 2011

A great positive image you have embedded in this well penned and poignant poem that clearly shows your beauty and talent! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more such thought provoking writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Stefanie Fontker 08 September 2011

Beautiful poetry, I really like this. Passionate but sad writing, it all adds to the emotion.

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