Heart Felt Moment Poem by brianna plancarte

Heart Felt Moment

Rating: 5.0


This moment feels so real
This moment seems so right
I wonder if this moment will last
for the rest of my life
cause your kiss is soft
your hug is warm
And the way we love each other
there is no reason why
we shouldnt get along
A wedding ring
a brides gown
two dangerous words
that i want to come out of your mouth
This moment
This moment
is so beautiful and every time i think of you
i know this moment cant die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gold Flower 07 June 2007

This poem is so creative! It feels good when you feel like these things! Keep writing! Lilly

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Albert Wong 24 May 2007

You have written this so lovely, felt that you hug so tight, very good imagination. I like it. keep on writing!

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Madly In Love 23 May 2007

Bri this is such a beautiful poem i love it keep writing

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