Saturday, June 28, 2008

Heart Vice Comments

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it hurts again
it started squeezing harder
it won't let up
and i try to pretend
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john silvia
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Catherine Rica Cosico 28 June 2008

schemic heart attacks...like it! ! ! well crafted and the imagery is nice... Cate

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 June 2008

I liked the way you presented this poem and the simple words u used to convey great deapths of feeling. Well done. keep it up with best wishes, sathya narayana

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john silvia

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providence, rhode island
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