Thursday, December 1, 2016

Heartache Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's everywhere.
Hidden in the shadows,
Behind the cracks in my heart,
In the deepest, darkest part of my soul.
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Chelsea Palma
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Pijush Biswas 06 June 2019

I'm same in heart. Heartache is like storm, when it goes peace comes.

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Chinedu Dike 05 March 2017

Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. You've painted a powerful picture of heartache and its reality. A well drafted piece of poetry bristling with wisdom. Thanks for sharing Chelsea.

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Chelsea Palma 19 June 2017

Your kind words warm my heart, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Kim Barney 01 December 2016

A very well-done poem about heartache, Chelsea! This appears to be the first poem that you have posted on this site, so welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Chelsea Palma 02 December 2016

Thank you very much for reading and commenting and I hoped you enjoyed it.

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