Heartache Poem by Mir Monis Zafar

Heartache

Rating: 5.0


Suppressed words, fogged mind
Haunting memories, blurred images
Bruised heart, aching soul
There she goes, breakin' my heart

Friday, June 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: break up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 14 June 2017

You've captured the essence and tortured state of mind of one whose heart has been broken. Focused and factual. Thanks for sharing Monis.

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Rajnish Manga 09 June 2017

A painful situation arising out of the break up of a relationship has been captured scrupulously. The poem brings out a very poignant picture. Thanks.

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