Innocent Victim Poem by Mir Monis Zafar

Innocent Victim

Rating: 4.8


Dishonestly tortured, torn to bits
Killed by her treacherous Love
Innocent victim, he became
Roughly whipped, blood-soaked heart
Heartbeats mumble
You've succumbed!

Saturday, June 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: falsehood,parting,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 18 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Mir. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 14 June 2017

Nicely described and well penned. Goes to show the whimsical and temperamental nature of love. Thanks for sharing.

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