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Heartbreak

Rating: 4.4
I sit on my bed
And I read the same thing over and over.
I read what he wrote when he loved me.

its over now,
Its been over for a while.
But the Heartbreak has never gone away.

The tears begin to flow from my eyes.
Like raindrops, they hit the paper.
And smear the ink.
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Cat Windham 21 June 2010
wow, this is a really good poem and it describes the pain of a real heartbreak. it reminded me a lot of my poem The Last Word. the pain so hard to bear you just give up... this is one of the best poems i have read.
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Iron Panda 23™ 12 May 2010
mhmm....another really good one (:
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a poem full of wisdom. congrats
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Yoni Assis 11 May 2010
Love the ending, and the use of the 'dagger' as the weapon. It makes it seem like it took place in a previous century. Haha, and we both used the Embers metaphor :)
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Rijad Islamovic 11 May 2010
'Death is the answer to love's mysteries'.....sad: (
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Shady El-shafie 11 May 2010
voted 8/10 Good poem
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KYLEE BARTZ 11 May 2010
heh, im 13. but thanks
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Cheryl Aldea 11 May 2010
its really good, i can believe a 14 year old like you can write this kind of poem keep on rockin........ take care
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Lefix Onyango 10 May 2010
sad but lovely...keep it up
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