Heartbreak An Pain Poem by jim little
Heartbreak An Pain
She toyed with my feelings
Cause she didnt care
She made be fell bad
About myself Heartless
Viper filled with vemon
She bit my heart i
Screamed in pain
She sits their
Waiting to strike
Again heartbreak
An pain
The fist and last lines should be checked for spelling, but otherwise it was a fine write. I still don't like the line splits, but that is a style preference. This is one with a nice flow as well. I liked that. GW62
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5/1/2024 12:42:08 PM # 1.0.0.1119
it seems that there is people who always likes to do so, but they will be regretted one day when they will left with heartbreak....what comes around goes around... loved this poem, very well done...10 Hataw