Heaven And Hell Poem by Kavitha Krishnamurthy

Heaven And Hell



I was standing on the mountain top
Slowly moving forward, nearing the mountain edge
I don't know why I still Kept going ahead
The next thing that I knew, I landed in the air

Falling deeper and deeper, I touched the ground
I slowly began to rise, but it was my soul
I found myself in hell, the place so scary
Many beastly creatures, devils whipping human souls

They started moving closer, I ran as fast as I could
I reached the end and lost my balance
Again I had a mighty fall
Everything started to repeat again, I touched the ground

My soul once again started to rise, I was so much confused
How could one die twice, what was happening to me

Now I found myself in a beautiful place, with angels and the lord
It was the heaven, had god forgiven me?
I was so much happy, having escaped from hell
Slowing moving forward, I reached near god

But suddenly everything disappeared, the ground began to split
And I started falling again, what was happening to me?
Once I reached the ground, I tightly closed my eyes

What I might see next, I was totally unaware
With a fearful heart, I slowly opened my eyes
I was at my home, It had been a dream

With a relief, I began to smile
What a different illusion I had experienced

Visiting heaven and hell in a single day.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessie Li 06 December 2006

Wow this is a really good poem, better than anything i would ever write. U have a creative imagination

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