Heaven's Praise Poem by moon batchelder

Heaven's Praise

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cirrus wisps - like phoenixes
rise from an azure sky.
listing moth-like toward the sun
as eventide draws nigh.

as light and free as they - the soul
that in my form does dance;
inconsequential to the earth -
except for circumstance -

of visible proximity - for who
can lift their gaze
beyond terrestial concern
is one with heaven's praise.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 10 September 2009

This is magnificent. Your way with words is almost mythical in proportion. You use them like little tools; the exact word which fits exactly, and only that one. Your poetry always astounds..(smile)

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moon batchelder

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bemidji, minnesota
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