Heaven's Visiting Hours Poem by CHRISTOPHER MUDIENYI

Heaven's Visiting Hours

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HEAVEN'S VISITING HOURS
If Heaven had visiting hours,
I would visit my grandpa for hours,
And suck the sap and juices from the fruits of his wisdom,
This unending wisdom, so contagious a syndrome,
To nourish me in readiness for my kingdom,
Juices that could detoxify my intoxicated system,
And rid this cruel and nasty death from my circulatory system,
I would borrow his cool and soothing balm,
To apply on my inflicted body and make it calm,
With my afflicted dry wounds turned into scars,
I would shine and reach the shining stars,
Relaxing and watching my beautiful dreams,
Fantastic dreams turned into realistic reality from the fantasy of dreams,
I wish heaven had visiting hours.

If heaven had just a few visiting hours,
A good meeting with my Dad would be ours,
I would ask all the questions there to be asked,
Making inquiries for all I had been tasked,
I would cut a bit of his resilience cake,
So that when I bake my life's cake,
The taste that would make mine not a fake cake,
With patience I would have to listen,
To walk in his footsteps and not hasten,
The listening vehicle's seat belt I would fasten,
My head with wisdom he would christen,
I would scoop a little of his sheer toughness,
And top it up with his utter kindness,
A concoction of shrewd firmness and fairness
A downright combination of success,

Wednesday, July 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There are departed souls that we miss and wish that we could just have one more chance to meet them again.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 05 December 2019

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Well articulated and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing, bro. Remain blessed.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 July 2017

Great imagination, Christopher. Thanks

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Christopher Mudienyi 26 October 2017

Thanks Jazib Kamalvi

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